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We were walking holding hands, I didn't dare to look up. As the darkness made demands, you saw a shooting star, I screamed for it all to stop. Since then your view of me never got quite the same as before. And, unable to let go of my pain, I sat down on the floor.

You did your best to listen to me, in your room. To words that I kept whispering, scared the shit right out of you. I think that I must have said a beautiful word. That you could cling yourself onto in all that other shit you heard. Me saying something that kept on growing, in the backyard of your head. Making tears run down your cheeks while I was silly, cringing in our bed. When I awoke, I woke up screaming, that there was somebody else there. Forcing you to face the things that I myself didn't dare. To face, and in the end, I had too swiftly been pulled in. Instead of facing my own nightmares, I was becoming him. Yet the moment I looked down, and saw what I had become. It had been you who pulled me out but, as those years, you had long since gone.

I started struggling to grow my mind, with pain and pills. Which, although said to bring me clarity, gave me nothing but chills. I tried to stay on the ground but went falling through. Too much me still wanted to be with you.

Till this day there is a thing, that I can't simply understand. How I turned into a robber, made you let go of my hand. No one had ever put so much effort into me. Nobody else made me look at who it is that I want to be. I'm standing on these memories, they merge into my skin. It's much too late to mention, but it's finally becoming thin. Now when I wake up, scared shitless, of that shadow in my room. I can force myself up and take a glass of water, thanks to how you once made my feelings bloom.
Let's countinue our
Fight against mountain dew
As we look back down
Feelings grow anew
There was nothing that I could do

It's getting cold outside
Step by step with closed eyes
Since you threw me out
I completely forgot where my heart lies
It was you who untied our ties

It's in our hands

Now we hold again
You reignite my flame
But you started late
Some things are hard to reclaim
When we have lost our aim

I had tried my best
You always wanted more
Then you pushed too hard
Pushing me down to the floor
And we closed up our door

It's in our hands
Howdy!

How glad I am to see, you amongst the very few, privileged to be reading me! :)

Now, just before we get going, I have a small precaution:
Compared to the other texts you've read, I'm afraid that I am much too awesome.
And given that greatness is confusing, I'm forced to keep myself quite small.
Nonetheless am I amazing, and sure I've pleased you all.

The End.
has been made
                                  Here lies
a wonderful bunch of words,  and a bringer of rare smiles
                        In The Loving Memory of
                                   Writer

                                   R.I.P
                             Pile O' Words
        (Start of coffee break - end of coffee break)
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Noa Stadler
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Sweden
I'm a weird, spontaneous guy who likes to hang around ^^

Sometimes I might release 20 submissions a day and other times none, for months.
Many of my posts will be sh*t so if you're one of my watchers, please just ignore those ones.

I hope everyone who visits will have a good time... and if you want to see good art, check out my favorites :D
My art dumps will come in varying shapes and have varying content (you have been warned).
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chriseastmids Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
many thanks for the fave ad :D
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Pajunen Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for the +fav
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DamaiMikaz Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for adding my work to your collection.
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CowardForward Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
np ^^
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Ceresta Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student
Thank you for the favorite! :)
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kach-back Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015   Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for the +fav of my watercolour "Flooded", I took the reference photo for it in the springtime on a walk with my daughter. It's now framed and hanging for sale on the wall of gallery located not too far from the spot it is painted from here in Winnipeg where I live. It was my first DD since coming back to deviantART and I am really pleased it was chosen for that. :-) (Smile)
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nickalive Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
thanks for the all favs
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CowardForward Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for all the awesome art <3
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S-Crepe Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank for the fav dear Bro hug 
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